I need someone to revise my paper based on my instructors feed back. This pape Leave a reply I need someone to revise my paper based on my instructors feed back.This paper takes on a good topic and has some good material. For example, you discuss Singer well. However, this paper has some serious planning issues. In particular, your thesis says we need a law to protect animals, but there already are various federal and state laws against cruelty to animals. Some of the things you mention are already illegal and some are not. You need to clarify what you are and are not saying about expanding the laws, or expanding enforcement. This entry was posted in Other on December 6, 2021 by .
