I want to see you incorporate some type of theory about spaceinto your essay. Possibly consider talking about why Disneyland looks the way it does.Think about what each different land represents as far as space and design is concerned.You have a lot to work with here and I am sure you will be able to find some things thatwill help you expand on this great start.I also would like to seeyou dive a little deeperinto aspects of the parks design that make use of space to either tell a story or to invokethat happiness you refer to. If you add those to your essay I feel like that will addanother dimension to your essay. Good work!
